DoubleDenial's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Salad Fingers: Market]

I liked the simpler art of this one. There's something appealing about the hand-drawn look of the environment. I don't want to make any bold claims about whether or not this is "better" than the style used in the more recent full episodes, but I'll just say that it has a charm to it. And of course, there's the obligatory gross part near the end :D if I have to complain about something, the perspective in the shot with the birds around 30 seconds in wasn't very convincing, but maybe that's just me.

[RUFBNYEUFNBYEUDBYWUYVBFTBCYEHUJSWVTRYUDWISNBERV goes to the store]

it's great
there's nothing to improve

...But in all seriousness, I don't really have anything to add. The animation is smooth, the comedic timing is great, and the looping is cool.

[Pike Gets Pizza]

Always good to hear that there's a new Lenstar cartoon. I really like this episode, it took a lot longer than other episodes, and it shows. It is structured more like an actual "episode" than a short like the other Pike cartoons. I don't really have much I dislike about this, but I'll try to offer some ideas. Maybe consider shading or outlines on the rocks in the background that are made with realistic looking textures to make them look a bit less like flat images. Otherwise, I don't really have that much to complain about. The story is great and I like how it's a bunch of different conflicts that all add up to Pike wanting a pizza. One recommendation I have for the series is to further push the idea that Pike's Lagoon takes place underwater. My favorite parts of this episode are the parts where the characters interact with the world outside of the lagoon, which couldn't happen in a different setting. I really hope that new episodes (or shorts) will involve the outside world in their plots like this one does.

[SMB1-1]

There's no point to this, and every jump and move has a weird glide in on it. Otherwise, there's not really anything to say.

aydyn05 responds:

Yeah I went WAAAAY overboard with the ease function

[Contagious Confusion]

Cutest thing ever. The ending's pretty funny, if a little predictable. The art style was charming, too.

[Stickman Shadow Raid Part 4]

Feels totally right. The grammar does need a little fixing, but it's understandable. The movement is fluid. Excited for the fifth!

DoesFireBurn responds:

Im a german potato and im working with google translate to check some words :P
the next thing im working on is a fight animation to test some combos and effects

[POP TARTS: Extended Cut]

Newest movie yet, and it's already frontpaged! It's great. I haven't seen the commercial (I don't have a tv) but it seems like it picks up where an ad left off. Nothing to say, really.

[Stickman Shadow Raid Part 3]

IT'S HERE! I feel that you should do things like capitalize the "i"s alone when they mean "(I) need to kill you," because it feels like it's not dramatic this way. Also, spellcheck! A little tip for the blood : Make one fully red color (the brightest without having a hint of white) for the blood, and then use a darker color with a smaller brush inside that for more realism, and if you want parts near the brain, add some pink near the middle with an even smaller brush. (Note that I typed these as a reaction to the animation, I paused to write these every once in a while.) Use periods and punctuation for more serious sounding stuff too. Now for the fights. Easily the best part. They feel like they have action, even without as much blood. Definitely an improvement from the first two. And the ghost effect... OH MY GOD, TOO GOOD. The "why should I trust you" line is a total burn. Excited for no. 4!

Also, a quick question : Can I make a collection of the SSR series? I won't claim ownership.

DoesFireBurn responds:

Thanks alot :D im gonna take the advice and put it in the next part i also wanted to go from 13 fps to 24 fps so its getting much more better the text will also get improved

and yes you can do that if you credit me or what evs

[PublicServiceAnnouncement]

Pretty clever, but as soon as he hopped in I knew exactly what would happen.

[Sharing is Caring]

I hope this won't get blammed. It's pretty cool, but it's something I wouldn't imagine the Clock Crew doing. You also sound like a great voice actor for children. Well, I mean, better than some people.

p.s. (insert speakonia voice laughing)