Always good to hear that there's a new Lenstar cartoon. I really like this episode, it took a lot longer than other episodes, and it shows. It is structured more like an actual "episode" than a short like the other Pike cartoons. I don't really have much I dislike about this, but I'll try to offer some ideas. Maybe consider shading or outlines on the rocks in the background that are made with realistic looking textures to make them look a bit less like flat images. Otherwise, I don't really have that much to complain about. The story is great and I like how it's a bunch of different conflicts that all add up to Pike wanting a pizza. One recommendation I have for the series is to further push the idea that Pike's Lagoon takes place underwater. My favorite parts of this episode are the parts where the characters interact with the world outside of the lagoon, which couldn't happen in a different setting. I really hope that new episodes (or shorts) will involve the outside world in their plots like this one does.