DoubleDenial's Reviews

[Salad Fingers: Market]

I liked the simpler art of this one. There's something appealing about the hand-drawn look of the environment. I don't want to make any bold claims about whether or not this is "better" than the style used in the more recent full episodes, but I'll just say that it has a charm to it. And of course, there's the obligatory gross part near the end :D if I have to complain about something, the perspective in the shot with the birds around 30 seconds in wasn't very convincing, but maybe that's just me.

[RUFBNYEUFNBYEUDBYWUYVBFTBCYEHUJSWVTRYUDWISNBERV goes to the store]

it's great
there's nothing to improve

...But in all seriousness, I don't really have anything to add. The animation is smooth, the comedic timing is great, and the looping is cool.

[Pike Gets Pizza]

Always good to hear that there's a new Lenstar cartoon. I really like this episode, it took a lot longer than other episodes, and it shows. It is structured more like an actual "episode" than a short like the other Pike cartoons. I don't really have much I dislike about this, but I'll try to offer some ideas. Maybe consider shading or outlines on the rocks in the background that are made with realistic looking textures to make them look a bit less like flat images. Otherwise, I don't really have that much to complain about. The story is great and I like how it's a bunch of different conflicts that all add up to Pike wanting a pizza. One recommendation I have for the series is to further push the idea that Pike's Lagoon takes place underwater. My favorite parts of this episode are the parts where the characters interact with the world outside of the lagoon, which couldn't happen in a different setting. I really hope that new episodes (or shorts) will involve the outside world in their plots like this one does.

[My First Game]

There's probably something that comes later that I missed out on, but the games were too boring to hold my interest. Sorry /:

[Super Responsible Parent]

Love it! Perfect example of a game jam game. The levels were fun and interesting, and made you think, without making levels too slow. There isn't anything preventing you from spamming the leaks, but it gives you time to break and think (although it's not that hard to "figure out" anything as 11 might be the only "puzzle"). I won in about 10 minutes, but had a lot of fun doing so. The ending disappointed me though. I was expecting there to be a joke explanation of why the bouncy house was inflating so much. What material is the bouncy house even made of? No amount of air will cause anything except for a few tiny rips. I also wonder who's saving the children. Does he have this many kids, is he a parent of one/a few of the kids or is he a parent of a different kid altogether? Aside from game-logic questions, this game is a solid 4.5 (like I give everything else in the universe, apparently)

dietzribi responds:

Thanks! All of these questions are open for interpretation. What do YOU think?

[Rolling Hero]

Don't use Scratch to make a NG game. If you're gonna, at least do something good with it like whatever Scratch fnaf clones there are. The controls are clunky, not to mention I went afk to type this comment, and as I type this sentence, I finally died. Work on the difficulty!

[reddit type beat]

This. This is why I use Reddit.

ninjamuffin99 responds:

so much win

[R~ "Fast"]

This is good. The ending is too abrupt though (make sure you specify not to trim the ending when exporting! Unless this is supposed to be a loop, in which case you didn't mark it as such).

["Fantasy At Sunset"]

Pretty great. (By the way I don't rate many things 5 stars, that's just how I rate things)

Edit: Honestly I thought I rated this 4.5 stars when I made the review

Ryzmik responds:

Thanks for the 5 stars! Recently there are people who gives zero stars to my stuff without reason.