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There's no point to this, and every jump and move has a weird glide in on it. Otherwise, there's not really anything to say.

aydyn05 responds:

Yeah I went WAAAAY overboard with the ease function

Feels totally right. The grammar does need a little fixing, but it's understandable. The movement is fluid. Excited for the fifth!

DoesFireBurn responds:

Im a german potato and im working with google translate to check some words :P
the next thing im working on is a fight animation to test some combos and effects

IT'S HERE! I feel that you should do things like capitalize the "i"s alone when they mean "(I) need to kill you," because it feels like it's not dramatic this way. Also, spellcheck! A little tip for the blood : Make one fully red color (the brightest without having a hint of white) for the blood, and then use a darker color with a smaller brush inside that for more realism, and if you want parts near the brain, add some pink near the middle with an even smaller brush. (Note that I typed these as a reaction to the animation, I paused to write these every once in a while.) Use periods and punctuation for more serious sounding stuff too. Now for the fights. Easily the best part. They feel like they have action, even without as much blood. Definitely an improvement from the first two. And the ghost effect... OH MY GOD, TOO GOOD. The "why should I trust you" line is a total burn. Excited for no. 4!

Also, a quick question : Can I make a collection of the SSR series? I won't claim ownership.

DoesFireBurn responds:

Thanks alot :D im gonna take the advice and put it in the next part i also wanted to go from 13 fps to 24 fps so its getting much more better the text will also get improved

and yes you can do that if you credit me or what evs

I'm awesome.

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